Neela hai yeh ambar,
Neeli jheel aur neela paani;
Neeli hai tumhaari aankhen,
Neela hai in aankhon ka paani...
Samundar se gehri tumhaari aankhen,
In aankhon se kyu beh raha hai paani...?
Is samundar main pyaar bhara hai,
Wafa bhi hai; Iqraar bhi...
Is toofaan main krodh bhi hai,
Dard bhi hai, Fariyaad bhi...
Naav jho phasi hai toofaan main,
Is main manjhi ka hai dosh kyaa...?
Toot gaye hai saare bandhan,
Zamane ka woh zor thaa...
Bichad gaye do sacche premi,
Is main dilwalon ka dosh kyaa...?
Neeli jheel aur neela paani;
Neeli hai tumhaari aankhen,
Neela hai in aankhon ka paani...
Samundar se gehri tumhaari aankhen,
In aankhon se kyu beh raha hai paani...?
Is samundar main pyaar bhara hai,
Wafa bhi hai; Iqraar bhi...
Is toofaan main krodh bhi hai,
Dard bhi hai, Fariyaad bhi...
Naav jho phasi hai toofaan main,
Is main manjhi ka hai dosh kyaa...?
Toot gaye hai saare bandhan,
Zamane ka woh zor thaa...
Bichad gaye do sacche premi,
Is main dilwalon ka dosh kyaa...?
Nicely written man .. although I must confess the first few paras felt.. a wee bit odd .
ReplyDeleteGood that your travels & the constant sight of the sea have had an effect here although the separation of 2 "loved" ones is something that I hope is only true to the poetry ...
I must confess the attempt here was to try romance...
ReplyDeleteThe initial lines reminded me of a broken heart... and that's why the climax was tragic!